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We've said we would be happy to check personal statements and offer any advice for FREE, which we are happy to do but instead of PMing them one member we are going to share the workload between us so we can give better directed advice.
To do this we've set up a form which allows you to directly submit your personal statement to us to a secret little forum (so your personal statements are safe) where we can read and put together feedback for you. Its a lot easier than PMing it to one member and them having a huge workload when we can spread it out between us!
I hope you like this change and make use of it, afterall it is free.
We WON'T tell you what to write but will give you pointers on structure, content and the usuals like spelling and grammar.
So to submit your PS you will need to be a registered member of the site and can click on the link at the top of the site 'PS Checking' or just click this link - http://www.midwiferyonline.co.uk/misc.php?do=form&fid=7
I have only just set this up so please let me know if it doesnt work lol.
Please rest assured that your personal statements are safe with us, we will never sell or give anyone your personal statements.
Please note: By looking at your personal statement does not mean we will guarantee you a place for interview, we can only help and of course you can disregard our comments and stick with your original PS.
Please note: We do NOT charge for this service but if you feel we have helped you and you would like to show your appreciation you can always make a donation towards the site, of course this is not required. You can make donations via paypal to admin@midwiferyonline.co.uk
We have added a minimum post limit for PS checking of 5 posts.
So to be able to post a PS for review you will need to have 5 posts on the forum, this was done to make it fair on all our users as to not have just people come to the site and ask for a PS review with no intention of participating which in turn bumps up the turn around times for regular members using the site and PS service.
For those who have submitted their PS for review who don't have 5 posts, this isn't aimed at your personally just something I didn't think about i.e for next year. Also if you have already submitted your PS we will still happily look over it for you with no limit to how many times we will and that goes for everyone.
I hope everyone understands.
Please Note: That spamming the board with unhelpful and pointless posts to just reach the minimum 5 post count will not be tolerated and your PS statement will not be looked at, it defeats the object of what we are trying to prevent to just sign up, spam the board and then submitting your PS.
If you've already pmd your personal statement to flopsy please resubmit it via the form :)
Beckiep
04-10-11, 04:35 PM
I have just sent mine... Hope it comes through. Need some hints and tips asap. :) xx
Thank you for the great service. x
Thanks we've got it, I need to eat my Chinese then I'll have a gander :)
Thanks to everyone who has submitted their personal statement! Your going to keep us busy haha, it's lucky I'm on maternity leave soon hey!
We've made a start and will draw up some feedback and get it sent to you ASAP :)
This is a fab service, is a newbie like me Ok to use it? It would be hugely appreciated
Yeah that's fine :)
We've got a few to get through though at the moment and we are working too. So sorry if there's a little bit of a wait!
No problem, any help at all is great I am happy to wait
We have added a minimum post limit for PS checking of 5 posts.
So to be able to post a PS for review you will need to have 5 posts on the forum, this was done to make it fair on all our users as to not have just people come to the site and ask for a PS review with no intention of participating which in turn bumps up the turn around times for regular members using the site and PS service.
For those who have submitted their PS for review who don't have 5 posts, this isn't aimed at your personally just something I didn't think about i.e for next year. Also if you have already submitted your PS we will still happily look over it for you with no limit to how many times we will and that goes for everyone.
I hope everyone understands.
Bev Smith
07-11-11, 04:32 PM
Hi can tell me when u say five posts does that mean i have to post on forum or rec one back?
Delilah
07-11-11, 04:43 PM
Under your name on the left of you post there is a post count. That needs to be 5 or over x
Lesley Ann Bland
10-11-11, 11:56 AM
I cannot say enough good about this incredible service. I have been in touch with Dappy and Delialh dozens of times (yep really!) about my PS and they have never failed to come back to me with incredible feedback. i now have a PS which I know speaks truthfully and accurately about me and why I want to study Midwifery. it explains why I am an ideal candidate without begging or appearing cocky. I have been absolutely bowled over by the service this site has provided and I just want to wish everyone in the same boat as me all the very best for UCAS and beyond. The biggest thanks ever to Midwifery Online - you bloody rock!! :D
MrsBanks
10-11-11, 08:08 PM
Aw shucks Lesley, you'll make us blush :)
I have had to add an addition to the first post. Please don't spam the board to just reach your 5 minimum posts, this isn't fair.
sandy walker
27-02-12, 07:27 PM
hi is it too early to start doing my PS ????? x x :crying:
Don't be daft, we've had two submitted for checking in the last 7 days lol.
It can take a while to write a really good PS, so it's better to have the time to be able to go over it and edit it without having to rush it.
MrsBanks
27-02-12, 07:54 PM
I started planning my PS about 3 years before my application :lol: it's never too early :)
lauraaa130610
09-03-12, 07:25 AM
I've started mine and sent it in twice already. When i contacted college for help they basically said stop panicing there's loads of time. I think its better to be organised early rather than rushing last min! Thankyou for an amazing service here the support is amazing xxx
Poppy C
16-04-12, 11:28 AM
I have just submitted my first draft - hope it has arrived ok? X
MrsBanks
16-04-12, 11:52 AM
Yes it has, will have a read through it hopefully tomorrow :)
Poppy C
16-04-12, 12:49 PM
Thanks kindly Mrs B :thumbsup:
Delilah
16-04-12, 01:04 PM
Iti has i'll look at it now and we'll feedback asap!
Lady Vienna
16-04-12, 03:14 PM
Oooh I will definitely be doing this later in the year :) xx
nasus1978
17-04-12, 10:57 AM
I'll definitely be using this again this year, last years advice was really good and I'm positive it helped me to secure the interviews I did! :)
Delilah
17-04-12, 10:58 AM
You know where we are!
Poppy C
17-04-12, 11:20 AM
Will my reply come into my personal in box or elsewhere? x
Delilah
17-04-12, 11:24 AM
It will be PM'd to you yep! We're on the case don't fret!
Poppy C
17-04-12, 11:46 AM
Thanks Delilah - sorry didnt mean to sound like i'm hurrying you along (Ive got a while before september deadline!!!! :D)
Delilah
17-04-12, 11:48 AM
lol, believe me when they come flying in and we have a fair few of them we spend ages looking at them!
I think there is one or two ready to send feedback too.
I'm waiting for the kids to get in bed before I can do it as I like to set it out all in my little format lol
Poppy C
18-04-12, 10:23 AM
Thanks very much for VERY useful feedback - lots for me to be working on - GREAT SERVICE!! :thumbup:
I'm glad it was helpful poppy :)
Hiya, Submitted a PS yesterday and wondered if anyone had had a chance to look it?
Sorry for chasing just need to try and take it with me to discuss with my friend who is also doing hers.
Laura
Laura I'll have a look tonight if I get a chance. My little one isn't settling to great in the evenings at the moment.
Sorry i really dont mean to harrass anyone x
Delilah
18-04-12, 04:48 PM
I've looked at it Laura - your feedback won't be long.
Delilah
18-04-12, 04:48 PM
Psst it's not harassing either! :)
Thank you so much for doing that for me i really appreciate it
You are all superstars
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No worries Laura, we hope it helps.
We know how hard personal statements are!
Gemma12
26-04-12, 06:18 PM
just sent mine :)
Gemma12
01-05-12, 01:03 AM
hi ladies :)
dont mean to be a bother but just wondering if mine has been recieved?
Gemma12
01-05-12, 01:04 AM
hi ladies :)
dont mean to be a bother but just wondering if mine has been received?
MrsBanks
01-05-12, 06:47 AM
Hi Gemma
it's been received, we should be able to get some feedback for you soon :D
All sent Gemma, I hope it helps!
Hey guys, have just submitted mine :) a really helpful service for those who don't have anyone else to look through it, cant wait to get some constructive feedback from someone who knows what needs to be inside a PS x
Delilah
02-05-12, 08:31 PM
We've got it Sami! We'll let you know asap x
just wanted to say thankyou
you checked and made suggestions for my ps and i have received an offer!!!!
thank you
Delilah
07-05-12, 07:52 PM
Congratulations Jen!!!
That is fabulous news! Let us know how you get on as a student!
Yay Jen, well done!
Take it easy before you UNI :)
MrsBanks
07-05-12, 09:57 PM
awesome news Jen, congratulations!!
Poppy C
08-05-12, 12:56 PM
I have worked on your suggestions and have just submitted my next draft!! :D
PS : Jen - that is BRILLIANT - congrats!!
Hope I have taken on some of your advice :) next draft has been submitted (I hope its an improvement) Thanks guys x
Did you get my ps sent it a few days ago?
Delilah
16-05-12, 01:16 PM
Yes Mum09 - we'll be back to you asap!
tyjae100
03-06-12, 04:52 PM
Just wanted to say what a great service this is your offering, I am struggling with my personal statement at the moment, so will certainly be looking forward to sending mine in to be checked once I have reached my 5 post minimum, (oh once i complete drafting it aswel) lol x
Alexandra1
04-06-12, 09:11 PM
This forum is full of everything! I think it is great that you are offering a personal statement checking service, really helpful as I am dreading writing mine and it isn't easy finding people to help!
Just had my ps reviewed, and I am really chuffed with the suggestions and general advice. Sometimes there is something obvious you need to change on your ps, but you can't see it, and that's where a fresh pair of eyes can really help! Really recommend the Midwifery Online team. :) x
Thanks for your feedback Faerie.
We try to give really detailed feedback to those who need it and sometimes its just a case of highlighting a few points. :)
nasus1978
08-06-12, 08:46 AM
Have just submitted my new PS - am feeling ok about it - just hope you guys feel the same!! lol
Delilah
08-06-12, 08:51 AM
I'll have a look now Nasus!
pr1ncess_mummy
08-06-12, 12:28 PM
Hi ladies,
Just wondering how long the PS checking is taking at the mo? And where will my review go once its been looked at please? Sent it on Weds if that helps?
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Princess yours will. Be sent back today. The majority of the feedback has been done but I'm just going to go over it when my partner gets back about 3 as the kids won't leave me alone lol.
It will be sent you your inbox on here. :)
pr1ncess_mummy
08-06-12, 01:10 PM
That is great, thank you! :)
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nasus1978
09-06-12, 07:33 AM
Brill, thanks Delilah! :D
Cherrycake
11-06-12, 08:33 PM
Just put my first draft in wooooo hoooo! How long does it roughly take to hear back xxx
A couple of days usually as we all like to read it over and have an input. :)
Cherrycake
11-06-12, 08:47 PM
Yahhhh how will i know when youve looked ect email? Im actually a little excited to see what the experts think :) xx
Cherrycake
11-06-12, 08:48 PM
Oh just read it email im so dumb lol! xxxx
We normally PM it to you here.
Where does it say email as I'll have to change that lol
Cherrycake
11-06-12, 08:53 PM
It doesnt i made it up! Once again dumb moment you send inbox which i changed to email! Im blaming tiredness! x
lol, tell me about it. My eyes are stinging!
Cherrycake
13-06-12, 04:06 PM
Hey im being super impatient i know so if im being annoying tell me but i wondered if youd looked at my P.s yet? as i said impatient lol. xxx
Delilah
13-06-12, 04:08 PM
I don't think anyone on here thinks you are annoying! Apologies - i have been lost in tax returns and work - but, will get to doing your PS in a minute!!! :D
Cherrycake
13-06-12, 05:11 PM
Yahhh im mega excited or mb i shouldnt be lol! You may think its horrendous lol! Thanks so much for looking over it! xxx
Delilah
13-06-12, 05:39 PM
It's no problem - a couple of the other girls will give their input and we'll send it to you asap. On a side note NO personal statement is rubbish - it's personal to you! Also no personal statement is 100% spot on either.
Delilah is spot on, there is NO perfect PS as they are all individual but we can give you tips here and there and point out anything obvious.
The amount of time I've written something, read it over and re-read it but yet I still have mistakes. Sometimes it's just takes a different set of eyes to point these things out.
That's us! :D
Unregistered
13-06-12, 05:45 PM
I no what you mean. I do that with my dlc work do it leave it check it a few days later i always find mistakes that way xx
Check your PMs Cherrycake
Cherrycake
13-06-12, 09:11 PM
Thanks Dappy have done.... I will work on it once i have revised can i send it back to you? x
Yeah either PM it back to me or resubmit it via the form, either way. You have your very own thread now hidden away so we will just merge your next revision into that thread :)
Cherrycake
13-06-12, 09:15 PM
I feel deflated about the situation i used that p.s last time, i got 5/5 interviews then i withdrew from the whole process i no times more on :( arrrggghhhh! start again x
Don't feel deflated it's all constructive. The standards of PSs are increasing all the time, competition is getting fiercer and fiercer.
I feel bad now!
Cherrycake
13-06-12, 09:25 PM
NOOOOOOO dont feel bad im just a little over sensitive atm (personal problems) I no it needs work its just a draft i thought of some more bits i wanted to add anyway. I look over it and send it back when iv had time to make some adjustments as you said your another pair of eyes :)
It's cool! I remember how it feels having someone look over your PS.
I hope your ok though..?
It's such a tricky thing to do on our behalf as you don't want to rip someone's PS to shreds but then you don't want to butter coat it as your not doing them any favours.
Ah the balance lol!
Cherrycake
13-06-12, 09:42 PM
no i do apperciate it i really do. I had a s**t few week so been well emotional and im at that point where half the day i feel so positive and excited by it but the next i just dont feel good enough or im doing enough or im scared to get rejected ect xxx
Thats what I call midwifery limbo, you don't know whether your coming or going its bloody well horrible!
We are all here if you need to vent :) the system and application process can be so frustrating!
Would someone be able to have a look over my PS?
LozO you need to have five posts on the forum before you can submit your PS for review. This is to stop people just registering just to get their PS checked.
Once you've reached five posts, a form will become available for you to submit your PS to us, we will then of course look it over for you :)
Hi guys. Please tell me how to submit my PS for checking. I clicked the link on page 1 but didn't go anywhere. How can I check how many posts I have?
Many thanks
Hi Kimmie this is where you submit your PS - http://www.midwiferyonline.co.uk/content/135-Submit-Your-PS there's a form where you can enter your PS. You will need a minimum of 5 posts before you see the form.
nasus1978
21-06-12, 12:39 PM
I must send you my re-worked PS!! I'll do it eventually! lol
lauraaa130610
21-06-12, 08:55 PM
my personal statement was getting in a muddle especially with its structure as i had so much detail to put in but thanks to you guys ive been able to start a fresh and use your advice and its starting to sound better. a huge big thankyou <3
Hi Kimmie this is where you submit your PS - http://www.midwiferyonline.co.uk/content/135-Submit-Your-PS there's a form where you can enter your PS. You will need a minimum of 5 posts before you see the form.
Hi. Think I must be going mad. I cannot see a form on That link.
Where will I find it? Sorry!
Delilah
22-06-12, 08:17 AM
Kimmie you need to have 5 posts on the forum to qualify :)
kazlizzie72
02-07-12, 11:17 AM
No pressure whatsoever from me peeps, but just wanted to check that you have received my PS :-)
Yep we've got it, your have it back tonight. :)
@kalizzie72 expect your PS back to you tonight, won't be till late around 10pm. X
Hey guys all PS's that we have in at the moment I will try to getback to you all tomorrow morning.
I'm not feeling to well tonight so wnt be on.
Glitterysparkle
12-07-12, 08:13 PM
Hope you feel better soon x
Miss Duke
12-07-12, 08:17 PM
I agree, take care of youself, the other stuff can wait x
oldmumof4
13-07-12, 09:59 AM
Just checking that you received my draft! Hope you are feeling better Dappy!
Yep I've just added my comments. I'm about to PM you now.
All personal statements that we had in have been sent back with feedback. Please check your inboxes.
Miss Duke
13-07-12, 02:26 PM
Many thanks for the feedback much appreciated. Going to leave it for a few days I think before attacking it again with fresh eyes.
Delilah
13-07-12, 02:32 PM
Miss Duke, don't be afraid to ask for more input. I always find the fresh eyes approach works for me too :)
Any PS's that we have in now won't be done until atleast monday as we have a study day tomorrow, then I'm taking the day off on sunday as I'll be knackered.
Miss Duke
13-07-12, 08:34 PM
Thanks x
Leah Hulse
14-07-12, 04:36 AM
Any PS's that we have in now won't be done until atleast monday as we have a study day tomorrow, then I'm taking the day off on sunday as I'll be knackered.
No Problem. Thank you x x
Sorry for the hold ups on the PSs we have in. I've been majorly busy but will try to do them tonight and get them PMd out. X
Due to our workload at the moment the minimum requirement for being able to post a PS for review has risen to 20 posts. This is also to stop people abusing the free service we offer, it's meant to be a 'bonus', something a 'little extra' that we offer our regular users.
subtlerevulsion
26-07-12, 12:10 PM
I know I haven't got a place Dappy, but of there is anything I can do to help out re: PS services then let me know x
joshuajay08
30-07-12, 03:43 PM
Hi i sent my PS in today anychance you got it ? I love this website just to let you all no it brilliant :>:>
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Hi i sent my PS in today anychance you got it ? I love this website just to let you all no it brilliant :>:>
Yeah we have your PS, we don't send out confirmation of receiving them. It expect it back within a few days :)
Cherrycake
04-08-12, 01:58 PM
I sent mine too :0)
We've got three in I think, hopefully I'll have them all back to you tonight. I can't do much when the kids are awake lol.
Cherrycake
05-08-12, 08:20 PM
Yaaahhh im so excited you done them thank you all very very much :0)
I've got two left to add to I think (other tema members have commented but I haven't). Those two will be sent out tomorrow as the kids will be at nursery in the morning so I'll actually have some time to do it!
Cherrycake
05-08-12, 08:28 PM
Oh proberly mine :0) xxxx
Tillybee
05-08-12, 08:40 PM
Oooh and maybe mine :-) Can't wait, thank yoooou! x
Fleurlur
08-08-12, 09:56 PM
Heya, just wondered what your turn around time is at the moment? I sent my PS in today. :) Thankyou so much for this!
midwifehopeful
16-08-12, 02:06 PM
Hiya
Sent mine to you yesterday :-)
Was it received ok?
x
Yep got it, Will try to look at it tonight. :)
midwifehopeful
17-08-12, 07:00 AM
Fab thank you x
I've PMd you PS back to you, check your inbox.
midwifehopeful
17-08-12, 07:05 AM
I've PMd you PS back to you, check your inbox.
Thank you
Miss Duke
21-08-12, 08:33 PM
Dappy help me - I am meant to start my work experience Sept/Oct time. I wanted to get my UCAS form in early, so would it be ok to say what I will be doing and learning on the experience, or should I wait until I have started so I can say that I have actually done it, if that makes sense :/
Do you have any other sort of experiences under your belt? If so then it's fine to say 'I have arranged a work experience opportunity at the hospital Bla bla, where I hope to learn'...
out in that you've arranged it and what you hope the experience will give you and what you hope to learn. Shows your being proactive.
Delilah
22-08-12, 08:02 AM
I agree here, get your form in - indicate that you're going to do it and then you've got some good things to share at interview! Just demonstrate that you have good skills referring to something else!
Also for those who are just starting to draft their PS, I am in the process of developing some worksheets and guidance on mind mapping topics to go within your PS and putting transferrable skills together.
Miss Duke
22-08-12, 12:10 PM
Thanks Dappy and Delilah. I already have non-maternity related hospital exprience and a few other things
Delilah
22-08-12, 02:03 PM
Cracking just relate it to the role of the midwife :D
Thank you for the guidance sheets you're putting together Dappy, I look forward to seeing them as I've only just started working on my PS. Yikes! Didn't mean to leave it so long.
I'm currently writing it and have one worksheet prepared and three pages of guidance to go with it. Oops!
Ok I have done the first worksheet, you can get it here - http://www.midwiferyonline.co.uk/threads/4603-Personal-Statement-Worksheet-Series
Miss Duke
23-08-12, 08:56 PM
Yipppeeee thankyou so much!!!!!
Let me know if it's any good lol
nasus1978
24-08-12, 07:20 AM
I think I may actually be finished!!! I have tweaked and added the changes suggested, just submitted for its last (hopefully!) review :D I'm actually feeling pretty happy with it, which is a feat in itself as a couple of weeks ago I was even considering just not bothering as it just wasn't coming together. Thank you so much Midwifery Online!! :D
Going to send mine soon no net atm but will send once back on xx
I'm away till Tuesday. So unless Delilah or MrsBanks do them an send then off, any PSs we have done won't be done an sent back til Wednesday/Thursday. X
I'm working on the transferable skills worksheet now :)
Do we get the feedback via a PM on here, or is it sent through email?
Via PM, I've done feedback on yours just waiting on Delilah or MrsBanks to add anything x
MrsBanks
30-08-12, 10:13 PM
I'm hoping to have half an hour later to go through some PS's
nasus1978
31-08-12, 06:45 AM
I just wanted to say thanks for all the help with mine - everything you've suggested has been for the right reasons and I am actually happy to send it off!!! :D Thank you all!!!! :D :D
No worries nasus :) wishing you all the best with your application!
I am working on the transferable skills worksheet as we speak. Hope to have it released in the next emag issue, very soon!
i have tried for two years and have had two ps. can i use parts of my original ps's if they havent changed?
Did you get interviews? I got an interview with my very first PS and kept that and used it the other three times, updating it and changing/adding new work experiences etc accordingly.
So yes you can do that.
tyjae100
05-09-12, 09:24 AM
How do I go about getting my PS checked? Its not quite ready yet, but would like it checked just to make sure I am on the right track x
tyjae100 you need to submit your PS here - http://www.midwiferyonline.co.uk/content/135-Submit-Your-PS
i got some but not from all universities. would it be worth sending it to you to check?
Yeah send it in and we will have a look over it. Your need to reach 20 posts first.
yeah thats fine i want to make some changes from experiences ive got this year.
Yeah jo5haw that's good, keep it up to date with your latest experiences. That's what I did. What have you don't this year then?
For those who want their PSs checked, get them in. I've sent out all the ones we had in today as I came home from the study day early.
:)
Mumsworld
10-09-12, 06:57 AM
I have sent my PS for checking. I'm really don't know how to put my study days in etc... I need to take 70 characters out but I want to put study days in but I like the content. So stressful, I have worked on this since last year :( and I'm entering it onto UCAS this week x
Mumsworld
10-09-12, 05:51 PM
right I have changed my PS again since sending it yesterday! shall I send it agian to you as my edited version.... 3rd time cutting it down now i have 3 lines to add??!!
I've just done feedback on the first PS out of the two you posted. I was just waiting on the others to add their comments.
If you send this one in then we will scrap the others as it just gets confusing. :)
I have done 3 months volunteering on antenatal and have done 4 months on a maternity ward. But am trying to work this into my ps.
however now am having to ring unis as thinking my grades are not enough for this year as requirements have gone up - this is going to be disappointing
Mumsworld
11-09-12, 07:16 AM
Sorry. I should of waited. I'll send it to you this afternoon. I hope the feedback is ok, I'm worried lol x thank you again x
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Oh no Jo I hope you have you get it sorted, fingers crossed for you x
tyjae100
11-09-12, 01:34 PM
Just submitted mine, eeek feel so sick now, its crazy. Can't wait for the advice tho. Gosh if I feel like this just submitting for review how on earth am I going to feel sending it off through UCAS!?!? Its just hit me how close it all is now :scared:
It's getting closer! I've got your PS and will have a look over it tonight hopefully :)
tyjae100
11-09-12, 03:00 PM
Eeeek scary, thankfully I understand the cruel to be kind approach lol. Can't wait for my advice tho x
We've reviewed over 90+ personal statements! Woo!
nasus1978
12-09-12, 01:59 PM
This yr??? Thats brilliant!
Na not Just this year, but we started late with the PSs last year I think. To be fair it's probably about 120 PSs as I only counted the threads but in reality a lot of the threads have multiple reviews within each if that makes sense!
We've done a lot more this year than we did last, but then we weren't really known about much last year.
I think once i have finished mines u can count me to be looked at. lmao
That's great though, your ideas are really coming through :)
MrsBanks
12-09-12, 11:34 PM
Runrig if you are struggling with yours you can send it in draft form. We will only be able to give a few pointers at a draft stage but if you are stuck it might help
Dietcoke12
18-09-12, 03:31 PM
i cant wait to send my personal statement just working on it not be long now yikessss:D
I best get on with checking these PS's, I think we have 8 in, Oh my!
oreochic77
23-09-12, 07:06 AM
How do I know if I have met the required posts to use the PS checker service please? Xx
MrsBanks
23-09-12, 07:11 AM
You need 20 posts and then you can access the link here http://www.midwiferyonline.co.uk/content/135-Submit-Your-PS
oreochic77
23-09-12, 05:55 PM
thanks i just didnt know how many post i had already wrote as i was on my phone but found it now! PS is sent off for checking too! x
There will be a delay in the turn around time for any current PSs in and any submitted over the next two weeks.
We are really busy collating and sending feedback from the preparing for your midwifery interview days, one we've just done last Saturday and we have another to come next Saturday. Plus our lives inbetween!
We will get them out ASAP.
Thankyou for the update, I sent mine today ;)
2012myusername
05-10-12, 03:15 PM
Hi! I've submitted what I've done of my personal statement :)
hummy42
07-10-12, 02:44 PM
Would I be eligible for the personal statement checking?
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I don't think I can access the webpage...:(
You need 20 posts first hummy42
hummy42
07-10-12, 03:37 PM
would it be possible if you could review my personal statement? x
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sorry, i din't realise you replied to my first post. it must be my age!
toozie94
08-10-12, 08:23 PM
Goodness me its all come round so quickly its hard not to get overwhelmed! It seems like only a short while ago that I was a little girl with aspirations of becoming a midwife and now its time to start applying! I would like to say a big thank you to the team who came to my college last weekend, the day was very interesting and they gave us loads of support in all aspects of applying for midwifery, especially personal statement writing! Thanks again team! :D
Dietcoke12
11-10-12, 11:34 AM
i sent my personal statement yesterday hope you guys got it ok :lol:
If you sent it via the PS form then we will have it. I finish early tomorrow from Uni so will go over the PSs then and over the weekend :)
do you need 5 or 20 posts? i thought i had 11 but i cant seem to view the form?
Dietcoke12
15-10-12, 10:36 AM
when you send them back are they in the private message bit?
Yep they will be submitted via PM :)
tyjae100
16-10-12, 10:58 AM
Can I send my statement for another check please??
Of course, we don't limit to how many times you can have it checked x
Hi, i sent my PS for checking yesterday. Just wanted to check you received it :)
Yep they always come through there's no need to ask x
I know the turnaround time has increased slightly due to myself starting Uni but just want to say a huge thank you to those who have made donations, who have used the PS Checking service.
Thank you!
hi, if im right i should be at my limit to send my ps to you. i hope you dont mind it is a draft but i hit a bit of a dead end and hoping it was all on the right track. i will meassage it to you and hear from you soon
Yeah a draft is fine, if you haven't sent it in already then be sure to do so. I'll be checking them over the next few days x
i sent it - or i think i did??
I've been having internet issues, I submitted my PS the other day and I hope it has arrived with you!
Southernlass
25-10-12, 08:53 AM
Are long is it taking to go through atm ?
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I'll be going through them all tonight :)
Obiageri
01-11-12, 11:44 AM
Hello everyone, Just registered with the forum today. I must say it is really nice to see how you guys are assisting people that aspire to become a midwife. I am enrolled in the college doing access to midwifery, hopefully i will be entering the uni to study midwifery next year! kudos to what u are doing.
Hi
Are you still offering this at the moment Dappy? I am applying for a course at the moment where entry is direct to the University and would really appreciate someone just casting an eye over it for spelling, grammar and waffle. Sometime when you look at things for so long you don't see them ....lol :)
Thanks
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